Gah! I'm so not used to being on here anymore.

I was shuffling through the drop-down list, trying to find where the crap to comment, and then I realized there was a huge button underneath the story.

Gr. Shoot me now. xD

ANYWAYS, onto the actual review.

I quite liked it. Anything that can make me laugh, and for that amount of time, gets major brownie points for me. u brot da lolz (Sorry, it was called for.)

You do, however, need to proof-read a bit.

There were plenty of errors within the piece.

BUT. Overall, I quite liked it, especially the random like: "Kukamunga Applebutter."

When I first read it, I was WTFing and LOLing at the same time. Heh. ;