wait so these "people" r gay right?

Aw, that was so cute!! Great job!

Oh my God. This is so completely adorable. I literally cannot decide if I like Owen or Patrick more. And your whole bit about Patrick trying to outsmart Owen about the stuff that he "doesn't want to do" is hysterical.
And the whole fight, especially once you know what it's for, actually manages to be cute and intense at the same time, while still being realistic...
AND there's a perfect ending.
Well. I think you've figured out that I like it. No. Love it.
I'm going to go now, because otherwise I'll ramble for a ridiculous amount of time and you'll get bored. But I've read some of your other stuff, and will be coming back to review, because I feel bad for leaving such awesomeness unreviewed.

Oh my goodness!
that was actually so adorably cute!
seriously xD ek.
Love it!!

*passed out from cuteness overload* Awesome, just, awesome. Aww, I melted a bit. Yay for Disneyland and LoTR (you managed to put those together, somehow, wow!).

aw. :D

omg, i was just sitting down to try and write up a story for this challenge... and one of my characters' names is Owen. XD gah

put that one back in the box for now, i guess. LOL

anyway... how cute ;3;

I am so sorry it took me so ridiculously long to notice that I actually had entries for this challenge. But now I've done...gawsh am I happy.
THAT.
WAS.
SO.
SO.
SO.
SO.
CUTE.

Seriously. I cooed and squee'ed and aw'ed like a demented fangurl. IT WAS SO FRIGGIN CUTE! I hated Paul too, that slag D': but then towards the end I kind of liked him and wished you'd write HIS story too, because...he's cute. And GAY. And funny. Except he tried to steal Patrick. JERK ;o;

Anyway. I LOVED IT.
IT WAS CUTE AND RANDOM AND MADE ME FEEL LIKE HOT CHOCOLATE. I loved it. Thank you so so so so so much for the entry. You're a star.
THANK YOU! *smoch* ^3^

Utterly utterly Cute! What more can i say? It was just so cute! LOVE Patrick and Owen and the getting lost and the proposal and just Everything, I just loved everything.

I'm all smiley now! Yay!
Just Awesome!
Al' x

I spent two days trying to read this in school and then I found out when I got home that I left my homework in my locker...so I read this.

I spent five minutes with my friends trying to figure out how to pronounce that long word.

I hope you win.

Fave!

- Kelsey

That was adorable :) Loved it!

SO DAMN CUTE! *w*

Aw.. That was a cute story!
I loved the rules, I thought they where kind of funny : )

Owen and Patrick where adorable together!


Awesome little story

aw so cute. fantastic job

ok just one question. How do you pronounce that word. I was trying to sound it out and everything. I still dont think I got it though. lol and I loved it. It was really cute. And I love that it followed all of the rules. Kudos for you