"Back to where the barbed wire tugged at my skin." Brilliant. The imagery here possesses such a dehumanizing tone.
"For my children to stand upon." Very interesting. Ice is slippery. But, perhaps the speaker wants their children to grow up used to stressful (slippery) situations, so that they can master them easily. Creative idea. :)
"Abduction eyes." I've never heard that expression before. Kudos for such originality. I won't go on and on about the UFO symbolism here, but needless to say, I was very intrigued!
I love the imagery - wild, distructive descriptions, just beautiful - and the unforced, natural rhyme scheme... but i have no idea what it was about at all. i love it, though!
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