wow this was a very detailed story. surprised but happy to find out its fake. But I was really causght up in the story wondering what would happen next. you have a talent

Forgot to say: Courtesy of the Review Game.

I liked the non-excessive repetition of 'I remember'. It eases one into the story quite easily, and got me into the mood of the piece.

But I do object strongly to this sentence:

'Until, nine months later, I am staring up into the miniature face of my rapist.'

Usuallt I don't object to writing, but I think that this unfairly faults the child. The way that it's written makes me think that you're trying to get some sort of dramatic impact here, but it's not dramatic; it's rather cheap, in fact. Could you change it?

-Stardust.

You NEED to continue this. It's amazing and just screaming to be continued.

The guy iz an idiot and he needs to be killed...uh...anyway i think itz good cuz well...ur a good writer,lol. and uh...yea so um...hi!

Oh and guess wut?

I'm sitting right next to you at this very moment,LMFAO!