I like this piece a lot. It's is really relateable, but you describe it in a great way. I also like the ending a lot. It's really cute and fun. Especially, that made up last work.

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Well-written! The descriptions are good, and I enjoyed reading this poem. (Though I am a bit confused about the rhyming - it seems like a free verse, but I noticed two rhymes, in the beginning and end, and the first certainly does not seem accidental. Could you explain?)