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Mistress of Eternity 2009-09-14 . chapter 1
You've captured innocence and frailty and gentleness in so little.

School has my mind and my hands bound to its beds, so I find no time or drive to write, but your work stirs some nostalgia in me. Mayhap...

Yours,
Anna
kyox88 2009-04-25 . chapter 1
nice one~~how touching~
no.peace.los.angeles 2009-04-09 . chapter 1
Oh, that is so sad. But yes, this took me back, with those seats and all the fun times, slouched down with your male best friend so people assume you're getting kinky because they can't see the two of you. Yeah. Definitely some bittersweet memories there. Very nicely said. Keep writing! :)
she smolders 2009-03-18 . chapter 1
I know this so well and you've captured the innocence at that age and the regret one always feels now ao well. The story you tell here is honest in a way that aches.

Take care.
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