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The Vegetarian Serial Killer 2009-03-21 . chapter 1
I love this line;

Better than Beethoven and Vivaldi and Amanda Palmer and Regina Spektor.

I can tell that there are two people the narrator's thinking of in this line. :)

But I do think that the last line ended the idea a little too abruptly. This should be more like a song, so it should end a little gracefully.

-Stardust, curtesy of the Review MArathon
Aquabuddy 2009-03-19 . chapter 1
XD for some reason this made me laugh
i don't believe they exist. 2009-03-18 . chapter 1
it makes me long for something.
poignant, in a way. but happy.
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