Don't tell me you're leaving us with a cliffy like that! I wonder if it's the owner? At first I thought maybe Vince was the owner but now I'm not too sure. I'm surprised she choose to go there with him in the first place. But he's an amusing character and seems nice enough. Although I do wonder why he wanted to see the Vault in the first place? And Chicago! One of the best places to be~

Hope you update soon?

great chapter! cant wait for the next chapter.

First...I think? I happen to check my email and viola! It seems to me that your writing style has changed (for the better) from the TCC. But at the same time, it still has that honest and down-to-earth, realistic tone. I like how you injected little bits of humor into this. (STD? =D)

So is the company only them? Or is it run by them and there are more people?

Funny. I tried googling 'O. Paroles' thinking that the Internet was so big, there had to be some english sites, right? But no...weird.

I wonder why she thinks they 'returned'. It could have just been sold.

Looking forward to more form you!