this is nice.

Oh, I like this. It could definitely go somewhere good... Please continue?

I'm can now say that I'm really liking this! So keep it up! =D

This seems to be an original twist on the "in love with my best friend cliche" (well at least it's one I haven't read). I like James's P.O.V. Zabrina's funny and witty, and James is so sweet with Ellie & they're both oblivious to each other (obviously, wouldn't make much of a story if they both knew).

I really like this so far. It's a bit corny using the Disney characters' names for the teachers, but whatever. I can't wait to see where you're taking this.

Well, this sounds interesting, so far. I'll keep reading =D

Okay, I just saw the story, and I thought it was a really cute idea! The whole idea of the two of them having to play Prince Charming and Cinderella is adorable. The writing is pretty good, but my advice would to stay on one P.O.V. So either stay on Ellie's or James's. Even though this chapter told us that they were in love with each other, from now on, it's just less confusing that way. Another good thing about the story was the fact that there was hardly any grammar or spelling errors, so it didn't burn my eyes to read! I'll be waiting to see what awaits these two lovers! haha.