Awesome story! A couple of times, you put a period instead of a comma for dialogue, but that's a minor problem. Anyhoo, great use of Japanese stuff (honorific, names, and etcetera...).
And on a random note, (How about C sharp?) there's a song called Ame Agari...if you aren't aware. From the anime/manga, Angelic Layer.

Hey, good chapter! In the beginning it was kind of muddy, but I figured it out... I like how it gave a litte foresight in the end, too.

Can't wait for the next one! Keep writing~

Uh, oh! Is Daisuke neglecting her purposely?! I hope not, no one needs heart break... Well, it would make the plot twist a little, and everybody loves heartwrenching heartbreaks in their stories... Whatever, I liked this alot, and how you made the teacher ask Akito to tutor Nakuru as well.

More time to fall in lurv~! ^^

Great detail! So he finally fell in love with her, ey? (shakes head) By time he did.

Anyway, great chapter, I liked the detail at the beginning and how you made us see through a lover's eyes for a bit. Very sweet.

O, the plot deepens... The love is growing thicker, and the tension is fading! What will befall these two lovely characters when everything crashes together! XD

Great work, Kisara, great... I can't wait for the next chapter! You're doing a great job at keeping it steady.

You have such a way with words! I love your writing! The way you unfold the scene, sentence by sentence, with such descrpition--it shocks me!

You tell this as if you've embraced the story as your life, and it's amazing to read!

I was confused in the begining, thinking that it was still the guy's point of view, and then you talked about wearing a dress and I was like--"What?"--but I concluded that there was a change in perspective between this and the last chapter...

Anywho, great job! 10 points!

Great story so far, I'm enjoying it. Where did you get the idea for the title 'Ame Agari'? I know what it means, just wondering where you got the idea...

ARGHH! Nakuru makes me wanna pull my hairs out in frustration! Stupid girl. I mean ... Daisuke is nice and all but c'mon! He's got NOTHING against Akito!

:Akito all the way!:

I want to cry. Seriously.

I feel so bad for Akito. I wanna hate Daisuke too but ... He's TOO good. So I'll just settle on Nakuru instead.

I want to bash her head. She makes me so mad! But she loves Daisuke ... *sulks*

I really like this. Though it did take me a LONG time to review since I got caught up with some things. I like you writing style. Its short, sweet and to the point. :)

Just watch out for punctuations. And is it just me, or the story is becoming more angst-y?

Holy cow! I was mentioned! DUDE. You make me feel guilty for being a slow reader!

Your gonna hear from me soon after I FINISH this. Trust me. I have a LOT to say.

hello : )
once again, very interesting chapter! i enjoyed the conversation between the boys and the girls when they were in the hot springs. so funny. haha. the sound like my own friends =P
i wasn't expecting akito to kiss her again. i'm not sure why, since we all know how much he loves her, but i just wasn't expecting it. maybe it was because he refrained from doing so the last time. haha. i don't know. i knew that indirect kiss thing was gonne come up. haha.
i wonder where daisuke was the entire time. for some reason, i kind of thought he was going to walk in on them kissing, but he didn't, so i wonder what he was doing. to me, it feels like he's almost ignoring her. especially since she hasn't seen him since the ride there. if this continues, i wonder if this will contribute to nakuru's feelings for akito, since it's obvious that she likes him, even just a tiny bit with the whole tenderness thing. oh wow. a lot of "i wonders", huh? haha. anyway, thanks for another great chapter : )

Thank you for taking my review into consideration :)
I use to like Akito a lot because he feels so real to me, but now, to be honest, he's kinda creeping me out... Is that mean? Haha. I don't really know how to say it... I guess he's just way too serious about it. I also feel bad for Nakuru because she doesn't know just how bad he likes her. Gah. I don't know. Haha. Anyway, nice updates, and I can't wait to read more :D

hello. i came across this story while i was lazily browsing the manga section, looking for a good read, and i'm glad i found this! i think your characters are interesting and unique (akito feels very real to me) and the way your characters are dealing with the situation feels very real to me, too. if i had to give any suggestions on how to make the story better, i would say possibly be more discriptive. not with how they feel or what they're thinking (you do a good job with that already) but with their actions and surroundings i guess. anyway, good job, and i hope you update soon. i'm still trying to figure out if they'll get together or not. haha.

Don't tell me she'll have an incurable disease! *gasp*

Haha. He seems incredibly retarded for someone who's supposed to be smart! XD