Aw, I like Dylan. She's adorable. And has really great friends, it seems. As well as a pretty awesome set up right now (British accent=love).

"Dylan slapped herself in the forehead. Melody’s eyes widened in surprise. Chris looked amused. And Trevor just looked…well, like Trevor."

Okay, that made me laugh.

Its kinda tricky in a way, 'cause Im so used to Shaun and Dylan being guys names, so its a little confusing lol.

Aw... Its cute how Jared knows Dylan so well. I just love that!

"“Whoa whoa whoa. I kissed you? What the hell, Dyl, that’s ** and you know it! You were the one that kissed me and then broke my heart by leaving and never contacting me again, even when you knew I had wanted you to do that for years!” Jared interrupted, fuming now.
Dylan’s mouth hung agape. Everyone else was in awe, as well. Did he really just say that out loud?"

That was another bit that made me laugh. Ah, thats good stuff. Especially the bit right on the end. Wow, I (imagine that in Italics and bold, with an underline.) thought that it was crazy he'd said that aloud!

Why sis he have to bee mean about it!? Why cant Dylan just accept that she loves him too?

Im going to answer my own question...

Beause in real life it doesnt just happen like that, and if that were to happen in the third chapter then you'd have nothing to write about :P
Great chappie. I adored it man :) Update soon, love :D

Okay, so Im not going to lie. I forgot that I was reading this story... And, I was sure that I had it on alert, and id I did, then I've just been ignoring the emails... Isnt that nice?
Okay, well Im catching up now, so please dont kill me :)

I really really liked this chapter, and you know how last review I said I dont like third person, well, Im having a phase of enjoying reading third person stuff, as well as writing it. But I cant stand badly written third person stuff, so its a good thing that this isnt like that! GaH! Its been so long since I read that first chapter so I suppose I'm gunna have to go quickly back and read the bit that made him kinda worst enemy and stuff... Ah... Very good story. Im glad I picked back up on it :) Promise I wont forget it again, see, I even ticked the little Story Alert box!

love it!

One word.

LOVE.

It's so cute and I can totally feel Dylan's pain.
Keep it up.
:)

They should have been tears of JOY! Hot british boys are where it's at! lol Good chpater!

Can't wait for more!

hey, this is great, but I think you should develop what the characters do outside of school, like sports or music

love it! post more soon!

Oh my gawrsh! I lu-huv it! Like, extremely! You simply must update.

Five stars!!

I am really liking this so far.
One question though... Don't you think this should be in teen rather than romance? Judging by the age of the two main characters, it seems like teen.
ALSO! Um, is it Shaun or Shauna? Because it switches and I was a bit confused...
Anywho! Awesome story!

-Janey

i think it was really good! Cliche, but really good! Hm, love the last line. Very good. Do you know what? Itd be funny if he ended up on the opposite side of the continent to her. That really would be funny. Haha... Is it all going to be done in third person? Personally, I prefer first, but what ever floats your boat. Right, im going to shut up now.
Cant wait for the next chapter! Update soon!

Yeah, luck was in his favor except for those 3 times he ended up with a broken nose. Anyways, nice story. I love Jared's nostalgia at the beginning of the story. It was really sweet, and funny how he chronicles everything by his broken noses. I'd love to actually see their relationship when they're face-to-face, but I guess we'll be seeing that soon.