|Reviews for S|
| Amethystars 8/31/11 . chapter 1
I love the rhythm and flow of this piece, with the repetition and simple word choices that make up a powerful message nevertheless.
| Demyx Lover 10/20/09 . chapter 1
Lovely. I like the S's beginning each line.
| the meaning of life 3/24/09 . chapter 1
I LOVE IT! It just captured me. I love repetition in poems and this provides the perfect balance in repetition, because some people do it too much. I really like it!
| irenethewriter 3/22/09 . chapter 1
This is extremely well done. Sad poems and I have a love/hate relationship because I hate being sad (like most people, lol) but this is also so good. And wow, you have so many poems! Do you have a book of poetry published yet?
| Isca 3/21/09 . chapter 1
I like the repetition of "it's late." This line connects the 's' sound (of sleep) to the idea of 'suicide' very well. :)
| Lilja Ruusu 3/19/09 . chapter 1
Sad and powerful, I really liked it. Might sound silly, but the title was creative! And i really liked the way you bolded each S in She and then it ended up the S was for suicide! D
| Erlkoenigin 3/19/09 . chapter 1
Very sad, but well done!