wow I really really like this. all of the lines are just so beautifully crafted with great meaning and great description.

i love "i emerge, eyelids encrusted with salt, shrieking for something profound."

i would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work, it would mean a lot!

beautiful job. great attention to specific details. i love the idea of a personal journey for meaning, and of course never being able to fully attain it. First part was my favorite, but the third and fourth were gorgeous as well. Favorited.

"I speak only truth in indigo"
this resonates within me very, very deeply - you are a beautiful writer

I just love love love this. It feels like a series of photographs, old and faded maybe but full to the brim of emotion. This is just so beautiful and vibrant and real. I love the progression from a harmless search to maybe violent loss or just an unfulfilled conclusion--life is often like that.

marie

i speak only truth in indigo
-nearly translucent