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runaway sheet 2009-06-25 . chapter 4
I’m glad he’s finally out of the hospital. He was gonna bus home in that condition? Oh well, I’d probably do the same anyway.

I really want to learn more about what exactly Damon does. His dad’s so random. Damon doesn’t seem to be interested in Alec.. . for now! *evil cackling*
And how come Alec’s all like ‘Sure, I’ll go to your home. It’s not like I have a place of my own or anything. Hopefully my cat feeds itself’ Ahahah, meet the family. Hmm… liking the sound of that. K, don’t leave us hanging now.
JtheChosen1 2009-06-23 . chapter 4
nice work!
runaway sheet 2009-06-19 . chapter 3
Gah, I command you to update! Obee-e-e-ey mee-e-ee. You are feeling sleepy, sleepy, now you are updati-
oh, nevermind. I really wanna see where this goes though. I think the only reason you haven't received 548720.6871 revies ii-iiss -b/c peole don't know you yet. Write more stories and once people get to read enough of your stuff, they may even put you on author alert *gasp*

Anyhoo, I really liked this story. Each chapter is so bite-sized and to-the-point. C'mon, what happens now? Damon is intriguing and Alec is well, Alec. He seems like your typical person. When things happen to regular people, it tends to be sweet. Or not. You decide, it's your story.

But update. Does this review count as 2? Will it make you feel the urge to write faster? Good. I'll put away the pendulum thingie now.
StoicCrying 2009-05-20 . chapter 3
Stalker! xD

I just love how Alec's life just got complicated in less than a month ^^

update sooN!
JtheChosen1 2009-05-13 . chapter 3
Very interesting! I like how this story is slowly unfolding, especially between the two main characters. Keep up the great work!
Dark Angel's Blue Fire 2009-04-03 . chapter 3
Hey,
Great start really enjoyed it x
JerryOnigiri 2009-03-26 . chapter 3
Sounds like an interesting start. I think it has a lot of potential although the chapters are a little short and a bit choppy. Please continue to write.
D's Silly G 2009-03-25 . chapter 3
yay a new chapter!!
WebOfLiezzz 2009-03-25 . chapter 2
the plot is starting to develop! I hope you update soon.
D's Silly G 2009-03-23 . chapter 2
o now this is looking like it's going to be quite the good story, well it's good now, so it's going to be quite the great story! i loved it everything about it, the first two chapters were super great and i cannot wait to read more :D
Spinning Jenny 2009-03-22 . chapter 2
O la la. Poor Alec.

Update soon!
WebOfLiezzz 2009-03-21 . chapter 1
Another interesting idea from you. hope you update soon. n_n
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