I like the last verse, the imagery is good.

thats so perfect! how do you write like that? And now cuz I'm a gorgeous writer chick I feel like hiding under the nearest bed.

if you find me conceited, so be it, but I'm seriously scared right now ;)

so true...love it

I like it a lot, very symbolic :] The only thing I would suggest is replacing 'flaw' in line ten with a synonym, like imperfection (unless, of course, the repetition of the word flaw from line one was intentional). Like I said, I like it, it's definitely not like crap. :]

Powerful, in a quiet way. Lovely imagery