In the words of (or I think it was this movies words...) the movie Signs "There is no such thing as coincidences; everything happens for a reason."

This is wrote very well. It stays on one topic and doesn't go off the track like most of mine do. fav lines:

"I spend most of my days

Walking be your side,

Sharig your best moments,

Sharing mine."

-EverythingHasAnotherSide

m... the rythm is good :) and the words give me a feel of some frustration. nice work! :D

Keep moving forward _

I like it but the ending bugged me a little i guess. you can't always be together sleep is important. but cute poem i love the message your conveying _

NA absolutely sweet ! ))

I really like the whole idea of this poem. It shows how hungry one gets for love, and how all the love in the world can never be enough.

I don't think I like how the end is sort of unbalanced from the beginning, though. There's a bit too much negative stuff in the end, and it overwhelms the happier stuff at the beginning.

-Stardust, courtesy of the Review Marathon (link in my profile).