This looks like a very promising start so far! :) I already like R.J. and Allister, it's going to be fun watching them rip each other's heads off. :)

I look forward to your next update.

-dmn.

first of all, i'm really glad to finally see this up :) you definitely weren't kidding when you said it's been lying around for half a year!

i found one typo: That's all R.J need, really.