You know, I've loved this adorable story since I first read this at one of our TR meets, it's just so sweet.

a happy ending! i love em

Good story! Usually I don't look into the one shots.

Aw,gosh, that was cute.3

And the happy ending was just beautiful. And the way you ended it made me think that the ending of this, is the start of another story.

And I'm really, really glad that you made the age gap work without making poor Arnold come across as creepy or twisted.

Daphne

It was so CUTE!

Seriously, it was adorable.

It would be kinda creepy if it happened in real life.

But it worked for the story.

uniquely-unique

Aw, this is so cute! I mean, a 17 year old falling in love with a 12 year old sounds a little twisted, but meeting up again in ten years made it work. haha But in the U.S., 12 year olds are usually in middle school, not elementary. I really liked this.

this is good

This was a sweet story and I was really surprised to see that you are a guy. You did a good job writing it considering English is not your first language. I'm glad they had their happy ending.