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Alenor 2009-06-09 . chapter 8
aw, that was the end?? i wanted more, to see what ended up happening with theo!! lol. cya next time ~ Alenor
Tohru Daihikashousha 2009-06-09 . chapter 8
1. Actually, I think this chapter was the best part of the story. It was the culmination of everything, and you executed it so wonderfully that it just leaves you with a gooey happy feeling of happiness and a good read combined into one. :)

2. Worst part.. uhm... I can't remember, actually! I believe it may have been something to do with Frankie at one point, and maybe seeming too rushed, but I can't remember. Obviously it wasn't glaringly obvious, so I think you're good!

patdav 2009-06-09 . chapter 8
story is crazy, especially the end...
Alenor 2009-06-04 . chapter 7
there's only one more chapter?!? wow! can't wait to see what happens, starla and michael is surprising but good too ~ Alenor
Alenor 2009-05-28 . chapter 6
oh meeting the family is next? i like!
A Minion Named Onion 2009-05-28 . chapter 6
So my only complaint is the names Regan is considering for the baby.

Other than that, this story is well-written and I'm liking it a lot. Can't wait to find out what happens!
Tohru Daihikashousha 2009-05-23 . chapter 5
Pregnancy isn't boring
Alenor 2009-05-20 . chapter 5
hah, i knew it! frankie sucks though, he can't just up and leave her because she's pregnant, that's horrible! can't wait for more ~ Alenor
Alenor 2009-05-11 . chapter 4
oh i'm guessing the little something that was missing was very important...very very important indeed! can't wait to see if what i'm thinking is right ~ Alenor
Alenor 2009-04-28 . chapter 3
aw, good chappie. can't wait for more ~ Alenor
A Minion Named Onion 2009-04-08 . chapter 2
That wasn't lame! I hate Frankie--but I guess I'm supposed to. Poor Michael. Poor Regan. I like the names you pick :)

more plz!
Alenor 2009-04-08 . chapter 2
hm...ok then, some lovely confusion happening now! can't wait for next chappie ~ Alenor
Alenor 2009-03-21 . chapter 1
hmm, ok then, interesting. i'm having a hard time seeing how this will be angsty, but can't wait for more ~ Alenor
Andrea 2009-03-21 . chapter 1
I LIKE IT!! =) go on please
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