YAY PARTNERSHIP! I think I've reviewed almost every chapter -.-' Oh well, the stories good :)

YAY More typos... lol : "his tone mocking, but there was a light in his eyes that was neither apathetic nor mocking. What it was, Draca couldn't begin to fathom – but it could not be anything good by pure principal." principle :) This is really good!1!! SIN IS BLIND. HOLY DOOLY. This makes it more interesting, and some of the other chapters make more sense :)

Hehe: "“Hm? So that – Glyphyou called it? What's it do?”" Glyph (space) you :)

Why hello there! Typos: "This was cursed ground - where men were devoured by the monstrous Shadows and the bloodthirsty soldiers under Adrian’s control. Even he - whose kin had long since been labeled as a scourge upon Viranus - felt as if he shouldn’t set foot on this hallowed ground." This contradicts itself -_-U And the action was great :)

Me again :) Typos: "‘The best money can buy, huh?’ the Vampyre wondered. There had only ever been one man he’d ever known to be described in such a way. But still –

‘Nah… now way.’" = nah... no way :)

I had a feeling that Sin was blind all along. He never really described anyone's specific features, just their auras. He never said that he saw anything, he Saw things. I'm glad I was right. :D

I feel slightly disturbed...I laughed at Bayne's death xD I love their teamwork!

-grins-