Laycus is quite a mean demon...
This is very interesting. Please update soon!

*snuggles Iova* the poor guy. I feel so bad for him ... but it's so pretty ... @.@

Laycus ... I love him ... but ... I love hating him. He's just so ... *searches for the word* deliciously dark I guess ... too bad he knows it.

Great story. I am so totally hooked.

... if i say "wow" will that get the point across? i will say that the ones written from Iova's pov are more emotional than the laycus pov, but neither are truly lacking. and Mr. Grey knowing is just brilliant- it has so much potential! have either of you read/watched okane ga nai? there is a part where the "aggressor" is given a book on caring for small animals. A similar "revelation" on laycus' side would be nice for iova (but need not come for another few chapters if he just loves that sadism) i hope the next chapter is out soon.

I like Lesley, he seems cool. Keep it up and update soon, I love how it's going so far!!
Faith

I can't wait for the next chapter. This story keeps getting better :)

Very good work! I wonder how Laycus will meet Iova's parent's?

Interesting that Mr. Grey has a demon contract too, or is it something more. Intriguing.
Poor Iova is strung out. He does like music. He loved Belial's playing.

Aw, I love Iova.


Anywaay, I do enjoy this collaboration. Both of your writing styles are very nice, and they mix well with the other. :D

Poor Iova! His life is going to suck. I'm trying really hard to like Laycus and it's not working. I hate big egos.

I just LOVE all of your characters! Very nice work!

This is both awesome and exciting! Please update soon, because its great!

cool! i love it already

Poor guy. Lycus has gotten him in a horrible state of confusion and panic. :) great job!

Interesting story. I can't wait to see where this leads.

=) Mandraco.

Great chapter, I liked it (: Laycus is definitely going to be interesting to read. I can't wait to get to know more about him. Keep it up and update soon!
Faith