 Kneecap 2009-03-23 . chapter 1"Bits of rainbow fleck off onto the floor. They’ll never come out." beautiful, and "I stare at my hands. Little rainbows peer from the deepest creases in my palms. Little bits of glory that couldn’t be scrubbed away in the rain." - really lovely.
I loved the way you alluded to things but never properly said them, like what I assumed was Kris's mother coming home and finding him and James in a...compromising position.
However, I have NO IDEA what happened with that window, but when it flew back like it did, I immediately thought of 'The Raven' by Poe and started screaming 'AHH' in my mind. It was so creepy...
I love this |