Short chapter but it's not bad... not bad at all. It seems like this going to be a set up chapter? Anyway, can't wait for the next update.

~Golden Witch

I have to admit that was an odd group of teenagers. Pretty funny stuff.

~SirScott

omg...so good!
are you serious, thats it?
plz update soon!

Glugh...Naruto...I shall vomit now, then review the rest later...

I'm really liking this! In a way it kind of reminds me of some High School Debut spin-off, and we all know how much I love shoujo. Can't wait for more!!

Epic win for the start of this chapter.
Whenever I read the name Winona, all I can think of was that girl in the now dead story who got hit by a van... Heheh...
Poor Adelle...
Batman Boy looks like he's going to be fun.

lol
cant wait for the update

im addicted to monster
(:

haha interesting

Hey, =)
Great chapter and I like the quote from The Princess Bride. Its already sucking me in and I really want another chapter to read. ;) So update soon please.

Looks like a promising start...keep up the good work!

Huh. Well, I'm glad you're writing again, for one thing.
I'm interested to see how this turns out. Adelle may be one of your less vocal characters, which is something I enjoy. I don't like the skimpy girl already.

Pretty good start. I hadn't thought of Wednesday being a bad day and I didn't know that the Princess Bride was a book. I'll have to read more to see how I like it.

~SirScott

Great start. I can't wait to read more. ;)

That was a very nice opening! Your story flowed well, and the character interactions drew me in enough to make me want to continue reading. :) I like how you brought back the idea of it being a Wednesday; it really connects the whole chapter together. I'm interested to learn more about Adelle and the milk girl, as well as Alex of the energy drinks. :)

And I love Princess Bride! XD Good book, that is.

Anyway, great job with this! I look forward to reading more. :)

Fy
The Promised Land forum

nice start! awaiting more!

Very nice and interesting start. Short and sweet. I found no major grammar and syntax errors.

I can't wait for the next update. =D

~The Golden Witch