I read the whole thing in one sitting XD. I'm such a loser :). I absolutely love this.

Placing a cast list at the start of every sceen is helpful. Just list off there names for all the characters in the play.

:} I want some cake! I really liked this story. I don't know how, but this story seems really funny to me in a flat way. This is goin' in my favorites! I bet you're friend likes the script!

the thing about being doomed to be with her is romantic and wow, I felt like april since I like to plan too, I even like to plan my funeral, XD