Ooh, this is already starting to make me wonder... I'm really curious to see who the murderer is! I can't believe that it could be one of the friends... that'll be crazy to see who it is! I really like how you write this from Michael's point of view- it makes it really interesting to read! Please update soon!

I really like this! It's really well-written and has definitely caught my attention! I can't wait for more! :)