I like this story so far. My only real gripe is there is no explanation as to WHY Olivia has been chosen to come and save everything in a different world.

Other than that, it is well written, and kept me interested from start to finish. I look forwards to reading the next installment.

Spawny

love this story. although maybe you should change the rating cuz you do swear. I mean I don't care but thats cuz i'm sixteen anyway love the story

Wow it's been a long time since I've read anything on FictionPress. I really like this. Hope to read more soon :)