While certain parts of the story were not clear, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Good to see a nice ending for the work, though. I do hope for more surreal transhuman pulp pieces in this vein. Ever considered doing a serial with QQ in it?

I say go for it. You may need to do some cleaning. Some of the factions and characters aren't clear at times, but nothing some editing and fine tuning won't fix.

Damn. Large shootout in the Quantum Temple, Quark dead, and even Addrisi reeling. Are we approaching the dramatic conclusion?

Nice to see this back in action. A solid chapter with well-written narrative and even pacing.

Finally, a good update! The Japan plot continues, and you leave us with a cliffhanger. A lot of Quentin's contacts are compromised, and you leave us uncertain about the main man himself. Hope the next chapter comes soon!

Cool chapter so far. The heroes have two nasties to deal with, which always makes for fun triple crosses.

Two other very nice chapters. I liked the talk show segment, which had more of your excellent dialouge. The way the next chapter switched midway to Marcus's view, in first person no less, was a little wierd, but I guess I got used to it. You always keep me wondering what will happen next.

Glad to see there's a suitably epic foe for Quentin! I do question why the General would act like that, seeing as she was one of Quark's allies before. As a minor thing, Glock pistols do not have to be cocked.

Very fun chapter here! Black and white political windbags, fun debating, and media as a means of political definition changing. Hoping to see Miho take some questions.

Hmm. This was entertaining and all, but... I can't help but feel like this was ultimately filler. I've seen this type of parodying before and while I'm sure it ties in meaningfully to the world of Quentin Quark, I don't especially see any of QQ in this particular chapter. Hell, Kobayashi, the only character here who's been carried over from elsewhere in the story, says maybe one line? I'm not very sure you'll continue with this bit later, either, since the story is fairly non-linear or at least linear in an abstract way and frequently changes POV.

These were two very nice chapters. Very nice, evocative descriptions of both Prague and Tokyo, with some good action as well. The plot thickens, and I'm very curious to see what happens next. I do think the other viewer was right when saying this was Morrison-esque, and I'm loving it.

A very "busy" chapter, I like it. =D Putting everything together into a strictly coherent storyline is getting a tad tricky, though I imagine that's partially intentional.

Anyway, some faves from this chapter;

“Quentin, do you ever get the feeling your whole life is just the wet dream of an adolescent? One who’s read too many pulpy science fiction mags?” “Occasionally. But I try to ignore it.”

“I thought Quentin was the only man who considered a particle accelerator a fashion accessory.”

“Our resources would be limited only by our imaginations.” That is a stupendous idea. =D

“Heh. I don’t know whether it’s just apophenia, but I read the exact same line in Rabelais and this ** comic at the same time.”

“Here feels like a memory…” Temporal Disruptors sound interesting.

Good to see what Quark's been up to! The fight scene did seem short, though.

Cool chapter so far. Sadly, there's not a lot of Quentin as of late. Let's hope they find him. Still, a lot of the secondary cast gets some screen time.

Hey, Steiner's back. This was a good chapter. I liked the detail of Prague and the hints of Mike's earlier days. Plus, you can't go wrong with some spy thriller-type intrigue. =D