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Mo- The Reviewer 2009-08-09 . chapter 19
Aw! No, I am not happy about Jen and Harry's ending :P

Ugh. Why did you have to do that?! They were so cute together, as your character, Sarah, had said.

:'(

~Mo~
lOVe BUq 2009-07-25 . chapter 19
i liked the endinq i thouqht it was really good (:
nevershoutnever 2009-07-24 . chapter 1
i was reading your profile
so -happy almost birthday
cheating not listening in class
sleeping with a teacher BAD
i love it.
-ryann :">
Kiliro 2009-07-24 . chapter 19
Well.. You can guess how I feel. Not happythat Harry and Jen didn't get back together, not happy that the story is over, immensely happy cause this chapter is awesome and all the blabla.
Oh, and you wrote my penname wrong. xD
I'll read your new story when I come back in a week. Bye!
-k
oHriginal 2009-07-24 . chapter 19
as always you didn't disappoint your readers!!
You know, I quite liked the way it ended. Jen had begun to really tick me off, so I was happy that Harry didn't want anything to do with her.
He seemed like a very good boy kinda guy lol so where he is now, really suited him! And I'm glad Sara is on the good side, and that she is still friends with Jen.
The pervy teacher got what he deserved, although Neil could have had a better ending. Maybe with Jen's mum or something, I don't know.
I loved what you ended up doing with Natalie though.
I think you grow to love her as a character, through the whole thing. Hate her when she does wrong things, but love her when she want's to try.
brilliant!
weldon to you! congratulations for finishing the story. Will miss it a lot.. but I'm looking out for the other one!
SpawnMeister666 2009-07-24 . chapter 19
I think you did pretty well with this to turn all the kids around and turn them into almost humans again, as their behaviour at times was more than a little on the strange side.

Still, I guess the moral of this is that we all make mistakes as we grow up, and the important thing is to learn from those mistakes and grow as people once we've made them.

Anyone who takes different things from this tale is probably a lot younger than I am!

Spawny
Tipsy101 2009-07-22 . chapter 18
You can't end it between Jen and Harry!
But I do like the way the story has gone, I was so not expecting this.
Connie 2009-07-21 . chapter 18
Excited!

-yes it's me again XD-

Aha I love Natalie. SERVE JEN RIGHT!

and naww for sara

Her and Josh sound cute.
XoLuluoX 2009-07-21 . chapter 18
can anyone say I HATE YOU

you screwed up Jen and Harry. that's not fair. you better fix this...
Mrs. Fang 2009-07-21 . chapter 18
I'm dying for the epilogue here!!
i loved how sara told josh to basically go to hell, lol.
but jen & harry?
Kiliro 2009-07-21 . chapter 18
MORE THAN EXCITED!!
So, this is how you love Natalie, eh? By making the others suffer... Oh well, it's absolutely AWESOME!!
I love this story!!
-K
oHriginal 2009-07-21 . chapter 18
oh my god!
you can totally tell that Natalie is your favourite lol
I'm glad you did that though
it wasn't her fault really
and jen did turn into quite a b-i-t-c-h in the end
but yay harry did the right thing as well!
damn i wonder what's going to happen in the epilogue.
Kiliro 2009-07-20 . chapter 17
Well... Again, it's amazing! I can't wait for the last chapter and epilogue!! Hopefully, the plan is going to work!! Go Harry and Jen! Muahaha. Buh-bye!
-K
oHriginal 2009-07-19 . chapter 17
wow brilliant chapter!
best one so far I think!
you haven't lost that slight sense of humor, but you have made sure that the story stays serious because most of what was happening was in fact quite serious stuff.
i feel bad for Natalie. I mean I know she is a mean girl and all that but still.. :( she was my fave character at the beginning
all that fiesty brawling lol
jen seems to be my least fave character now. She hasn't become slutty, but atleast Natalie had that excuse. Jen is just kinda being evil now.
Sara is wikid! I hope she wins Prom Queen, because she deserves it. and harry is still good. a bit of a wimp to be honest, and I don't think he sounds cool anymore, or a bad boy at all.
he's more of a mummy's boy kinda guy LOL
brilliant chapter though
it's sad that it's all coming to an end :(
oHriginal 2009-07-19 . chapter 16
reviewed late, sorry!
i noticed you had another chapter, so I thought I should get reviewing and reading quick
great chapter!
i'm disappointing that you are ending it quickly, although the new story sounds great! This has just started in a way, and you could have spun a few more tales out of the interlinked characters, making it go on for a few more chapters at least, but I know what you mean, when you just can't deal with characters you don't like anymore :D
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