I love it! It would be too cruel, I think, having to go through life in North America while being named Leonardo. I think Cori is my favorite character; she matures a lot throughout the story. Hurley does a good job of being that smelly creep everyone knows and hates - I can think of a few Hurleys myself. I love your realistic writing and well rounded characters.

You are gifted. Seriously, that was amazing! You portrayed Danielle so wonderfully, and you made Hurley act like the biggest ass-hole so perfectly. Hell, he IS and ass hole. But really, really, really, really good- no, fantastic- fiction!

Aww, that was cute. =)

Loved Leo's POV! He kinda reminds me of someone I know.


But the epilogue was way too mushy, lol.

I hate, hate, hate CORI! She is the biggest whore ever!


Poor Danielle, ugh I wish I could just punch Cori!

I love how he tried to talk to her, but he thought she shut him down, poor leo.

hURLEY DESERVES TO DIE! Ugh! I dislike him so much...

I love how Leo can understand her...they were so meant :)

Love it! Hate Cori. I love Leo already:)

Okay so I was looking through your reviews and I thought I would give you some :)

Great start to the story, this chapter hooked me:)

I hate Hurley with a passion

Wow. This was a great read - you have a real talent for writing, I must say.
You had a couple of grammar mistakes here and there but who cares,? The plot, characters and everything else made up for it :)
I would've reviewed on your first chapter because it was such a good hook, but I was really keen on reading on so forgive me :D
I'm hoping to see more of your stories (and I'll definitely be reading the sequel to this) and keep up the good work!!

This story is damn good. You're 13 rite? I'm jealous! I shall go read ur sequel now.

omg you don't know how much I love this story
it is so cute and I'm sorry I'm only reviewing now that I've finished reading it and not earlier on but I just couldn't stop because everytime a chapter finished a had to go to the next one and when there was a cliffy or something I'd be speechless so I wouldn't have known what to write
aniwaii your story is amazing. I'd gone past it once but I'm so glad I chose to go back and read it

aniwaii I look forward to reading the sequel or your other stories :)

Poor Danielle! Brilliant beginning to the story. Intriguing. :)

mistake 4 paragraph after the word obsessed. There are 2 withs. Love ur story by the way. Been thinking about it the whole day!

I was kinda freaked out by the first story but i saw the tremendous no. of reviews and continued reading on. Guess I made the right choice!

That wad absolutely amazing! That was so well written. Great plot and loved the characters. Loved how Danielle was able to talk at the end and I don't know how many times I have to say this but...Leo is amazing! He is so sweet and protective and tough and caring. The perfect guy for absolutely all the girls out in the world! Haha. And I loved how your story portrayed their growth of their relationship. I also loved the parts when I'd just start laughing at the humorous parts. There were some times when Leo was hilarious! haha.
And I'm so jealous of Danielle! haha.

I'll read the sequel!

I'm totally loving this story and I just ahd to finally write down a review to let you know I'm reading! Even though this is a completed story I wanted to let you know I'm reading.

By the way I think Leo is very cute. sure a jerk, in a way but I dont' see it as that.