*glomps Elliot* Best character, in my opinion. I'll send edits over later, after BGT, ehehe. And why pink? Eww! Lolz. Please don't let her spraypaint a horse pink. Please. Get her a big bay one called Bob, or something. Or Apalachi. That name seems stuck in my head, randomly... Meh, keep it up! Loving this story, pal! :D

'wulf

aw, jazz y so short? i wanna know wht happens!

but i still luv it!

:D

I love Elliot, he's mine k?

Kay, love this story aswell.

:(...but also :)

I love the name Elliot too!

Darn you for making this story sad and hard, but darn you even more for making it so good!

Oh my oh my!

This story is jaw dropping, in a good way.

OH MAN!

Intense, I'm going to shut up and read more.

I love the name Kyle.

Even the name Alice, and I love this story.

So far..lol, nah, I'll always love it.

But I'll love it more if I read more.

Hey! This is really good! :D one minor correction though the line that says...you," he kissed... there needs to be a period after you and he needs to be capitalized other than that great. Interested in reading more...

Hi, Jazz! Omg, I luv, luv, luv this story! It's sad...but who doesnt love a good sad story? The depressing ones always turn out to be the best. Ok, so I reviewed...where's my cookie? Send it on over 'across the pond'. Lolz. Bai!

good good good please update!

Give cookie now! *pouts* I shall be your proofreader forever, dude, you will never escape my phearsome skillz! And already, I don't like Kyle and I love Elliot :D Write more! You're ill, you have enough time to do loads! Kill Kyle! Rar!

'wulf