Ack, the jealousy towards your creativity rolls off of me in colossal waves! This was by far one o' the best. (just one. there are too many masterpieces to narrow it down) It is very smooth && flowing. Simply thought-provoking && artistic. - strobeXlightXstatic

I think that this is a really good poem. It sounded like it was lyrics, but I didn't know if it was or not. It would be get for a song too though.

The plot behind this one was interesting, I really liked it! D