I love this! This is awesome

I love the allusion, and I love how you use personification with the apple, and use its point of view.

It's amazing, really clever.

You are an amazing writer.

Oh, Dia, it's terrific! It made me laugh, and yet made me sad at the same time. I love how you remember small details from things and are able to make such a nice portrayal from them.
Nice work.

Buutiful! :P
Liketh this one. :D

Oh my goodness... I loved this one!