would love it if you updated this, i'd really like to see where you're going to take it.
Best of luck and hope to read something in the very near future.

Hey! I've had this in my inbox for weeks, and never got round to doing something about it until now.

Another great chapter; as always, the excellent standard of your writing astounds me. I wish I could write as well as you! And have the motivation to actually finish something... :P

I really love the interaction between Jamie and April in this chapter. You got the right amount of rivalry and flirting and it worked really well.

Just one thing: you missed out a word here - "‘Sorry. We some fun, is that a crime?’." There should be an and, but you've probably already noticed that :)

Don't think there's anything else to say... Other than how are you? I never got to reply to your last PM.

Love you, Bex x

OMG! this is the best chapter ever!XD

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Hi! I've been meaning to read this for ages, and I've only just had enough time to do it.

As always, your writing amazes me. You write such intricate characters and fit them in to a great plot line. I really, really like this story, and Jamie sounds gorgeous! Alice has to be my favourite character so far, she sounds so cute! Keep writing more of this, I really like it!

-Bex

Heh, fun fun...Now it's going to be interesting.

! This is so cool! So did she raise a vampire?(duh) XD

I wrote a review because ...this chapter is kick ass

Well done on introduction of the other characters. It flowed nicely

loco...

AH!

Another amazing story!(Chapter 1 is awlsome!. I cant wait to read the rest.

Love the characters and the ease they have with each other. Really well written with a catching intrigue

Hmm, the plot thickens. So April let the zombie loose? And the rest of the team...ah! Suspense. Wow, her Dad's parner is a jerk XD.

Wow, great chapter. The details in this were amazing. Keep up the good work, i can't wait to go on to chapter 2. The zombie description was what got me the most.

Aw. Please update soon.