love the story! I love the description how the narrator feels.

This story is beautiful and I just wanted to comment on the ways that you described some things:

'bled rivers of crimson' - I've always used rivers as a way to describe the flowing of tears but this was a great way to emphasize blood.

'drowning in my aftermath' - Yeah, I've picked the two emo-ish sayings, but they're touching.

I think that too many people don't realize that lesbians and gays are just the same as heterosexuals. They still deal with the same relationship problems and such. I think that they expect that we find one person and that's it.

Anyway, this is amazing. I'm favoriting it.

- Hey Twilight