wow lillie that was absolutly amazing it took me forver ti sread the last bit for the tears in my eyes and the runny nose. u realy are a wonderful writer though im sure u have heard it a thousand times

i like the playfulness in the part where she pretends to cry from the lizard. i think every girl has one of those tricks up her sleeve.

this story is so sad, its always hard to lose someone u care and love so much nut its beautifully written. xox