saw what!? gosh darn


love this chapter cant wait for the next one.! lol

Oh, a cliffhanger. I don't think I'd be able to stand it if the next chapter takes too long *hint hint*. However, great job on this one. I really enjoyed it :D.

A month late? I'll forgive you, only because that was AWESOME.

Nice touches there. I can see why it was late. Nice.

It's him messing with her fire? Purely unintentional, I'm assuming?

:D

~Myia

Great update ^^ I like the suspense much better than the first version~ Keep up the great work and I'll be waiting for updates~

Your stories are all so interesting, I can't wait for more. XD

Love love love the story! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ^_^

i've read both previous draft of this story n loved both of them. i noticed a few mistakes in this chapter, for example instead of the possibly, it should be the possibility.
i love the storyline and find it really refreshing.
i wonder if you could grant my request to put up the previous completed version? i would really like to read it again just to compare the differences with the current one... keep up the good work and i hope you'll update soon.

Whee more chapters~ Loving the second version lots right now~ Hope to read more soon ^^

Absolutely GREAT! As usual I'm starving for the next chapter!

Hey!Nice story you wrote there.I just wanted to tell you that you say "mon cher" when you refer to a guy and "ma cherie" when you refer to a girl.

M yum...huh sorry, too busy fantasizing :D. You took out the snow angels *sulks*. I like that part. Other than that, loved it!

catherine m.

Rawr! Nummy Shateal...and moar of the Sindian damnnit!

this is the second time reading Fire and Furball. I can see the difference between the two. I loved the first version but I have to say that the revised one just took the top spot. The story seems to be flowing a lot more smoothly and its easier to fallow. Please do not make me wait long for the next update. Even though I know what is supposed to happen next, for me this is a complete new story. If you do not update soon, I will have angry rabbits hunt your sleep. :)

Why nust you tease us so with that one?

lol.

I was wondering... do you think that I could possible re-read the first version of Fire and The Furball?

I'm out of books to read, and I REALLY liked it. And sincve this version isn't done yet...

I was wondering if I could maybe re-read the first version.

~Faeries

Just because you pleaded so much...


It was great...now keep writing. -_-

Kidding, but seriously I think that this version is progressing a lot better than the first try and overall its very well written. Looking forward to your other updates as well, hopefully they will come sooner rather than later, though I know from personal experience that it can be a relatively hard process.