Hi
Like the flow of the poem. It kept me involved right to the end and then I didn't see it coming. I like the switch from the physical descriptors (sinuous flow, hips, knees) to the artistic environment you set with language. Pain, canvas brush paints.
I thought the change/transition moved well and the use of language carried it along.
I liked it.
Gavin

Fantastic! This is probably the best poem meaning i have read here.

oh this is fantastic! the description is flawless and the hidden meaning is grand.
y&r