"So I stand here,

defeated.

I stand here,

leaded

into some kind of plan."

I loved those lines! Also where you give each word its own line it makes them seem so intense. Really in your face...

SO.

GO.

HOME.

Makes you ponder each word:)

I think you're the only writer that writes songs that are short, that I like. lol. Well, as of yet. I'm not a fan of short songs. But you make each words, seem so powerful! Amazing job!

another great song/poem!

"Stand here, and wait,

like some person,

that you never knew."

I loved that line, it was amazing, cool song! D