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Yay!

1) I hope you do get published someday, you deserve it and I think that you're a wonderful writer. There are a few grammatical things that need to be cleaned up, but that's what editors are for.

2) I hope that you continue updating this story. You can't leave on a note like that!! Never have I wanted to tear off the fingernails of plagiarists (very slowly) more than I do right now, after seeing the havoc wreaked on this site and my fellow writers.

I love the time you spend on your characters and the insight you give them. A lot of people on here write such shallow characters, but yours are some of the best on FP. I enjoy your writing style, it's very fluid and informative, which shows your talent.

I'm only on the second chapter and this has to be one of the most charming stories I've come across on this site!

omg! This was so freakin awesome! You are an absolute genius. I read it all in one day. I'm like, addicted to this story. im not much of a patient person so waiting is one of my strong points so... PLEASE UPDATE SOON! cant wait to see more of this amazin work!

I have been gone for so long, but I have now gotten caught up on the last two chapters, sorry it took so long!

I love how things are getting between Olivia and Ben!! They are so cute around each other and their declaration was awesome, good job!

It does seem like Toby is jealous of Ben and Olivia's possible relationship...or is that he is jealous because he feels that he won't be wanted anymore?

This is amazing! The chemistry between Olivia and Ben is well done. Keep up the good writing and don't stop!

Amazing, for the 5th time. Really, really, amazing. Never get sick of this story >

NO! I was so looking forward to going to the next chapter!! :(

You know, this is better than ALOT of books ive read. Like published. You should definately send it off to some publishing houses! Im sure they'll accept it!!

- Vanilla

i LOVE this story!!
and i have a sad feeling that toby is going to ruin their date, or something to that effect.
PLEASEPLEASE update soon, i can't wait to read more!!

keep up the great work!!

omg this story is SOO good; i read it all in one sitting. i hope you continue it! u cant just leave us hanging after they FINALLY got together!

i have loved this story ever since i read 'better together.' i kind of hoped/knew (really only hoped) that you would write a spin off with olivia and ben. i love their chemistry and how they evolved together. also the progression of their relationship wasn't cliched; it didn't just suddenly happen that they like each but through time and proximity to each other as well as other characters' opinions and insights. really hope you continue the story now that summer's over; can't wait for a new chapter.

i forgot i never reviewed this chapter. so, a little late, i love this story. an all time favorite, if you will, so please update(!) when you can.
-ellie

I LOVE THE STORY!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Also, will Jillian Phillips be in the story?
Your new faithful fan,
truebleu

I love this story!! I hope you find time to update soon!