Hi, so I've been waiting a long time for you to update and I know your busy and maybe you don't want to write anymore because of all these crazy people plagiarizing you but if there's anyway I can maybe buy the story? Like can you post somewhere we the readers can I buy because all ur stories are amazing and should've been published like years ago.. Anyways please let us know! :)

This is really an incredible story. Your characters are so well-developed and likable, your writing is amazing, and the development of the relationships is just addicting and I can't get enough. I know it's been over a year that you've updated, but I hope you're still writing because you've got a ton of talent. I hope to see an update for this sometime :)

PLEASE UPDATE! *puppy eyes*

That was amazing. I love the transition from dislike to friends to like and finally to love. It was amazing. Was chapter 19 the last chapter?

WOMAN !
please update this one !
its been far too long !
you've started off with new stories, which by the way are classic,but PLEASE !
its been really awfully long.
and we miss Ben and Livi.
Please...

Harry Potter? LOL, this reminds of HP. Three best friends, harry, olivia and toby...and bendraco malfoy...

GAHHH IT'S BEEN ALMOST A YEAR SINCE THIS CHAPTER WAS POSTED?! NUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
Okay, please please please please PLEASE update, templeton21! I'm begging you! I'm on my knees (not literally, because I'm sitting at the computer, typing, obviously but you know what I mean)! I kowtow to you! PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY! It's too amazing to leave unfinished! Ben and Olivia are too perfect together to leave unfinished! I WON'T EVEN POINT OUT YOUR MINOR VERB TENSE ERRORS BECAUSE I JUST REALLY WANT YOU TO UPDATE! DDDDDDDDDDDD:
Sorry, that was really demanding. What I mean to say is, please continue and finish this story because you have so many anxious and hopeful readers and do you really want to let us all down? Hmmm? LOL okay no just please update. Please times infinity. I haven't begged anyone like this ever in my entire life, so that means I must be really serious and your story and writing must be seriously good and and and and and I really hope you read this and feel my-no, our collective pain ("our" referring to all of us readers, BTW). Because I honestly, honestly, honestly want to read the rest of this.
Thank you for writing such an amazing story and sharing it here on FP! :D

Wonderful!
I love Ben :p
Please write more, I want to know how this ends!
x

uggghh you cock-block aside from that i love the story thank you still a bit unfinished ... but i can live with that!

I see U already have a ton of reviews so I'll just toss 1 more on the pile. Pretty good writing. U made me feel sad for Olivia & made me laugh at Ben's financial problems & his unfamilarity with a credit card statement - poor guy.

Oh. My. God. Major cliff hanger! You better update soon :P seriously! I can't wait :)

Oh, my, gods...I just get the feeling of them being Harry Potter characters...

Olivia: Hermione Granger

Ben: Draco Malfoy

Toby: Ron Weasley

Harry: Obviously, Harry Potter

Anne: Ginny

I'll find out who Violet is, as soon as I read more about her...then I'll tell you who she acts like:) LUv the story!

UGHHH BRING THIS STORY BACK I WANT BEN AND OLIVIA SEXY TIMES -sobs-

Ahhhhh! Wheres the rest of the story?! Please continue this! I really wanna know what happens after she loses her virginity ti him and im guessing theres going to be a perfect happy ending :3 well, all i can say us keep up the awesome work, i look firward to reading more of your stories and PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! :D xx

i've read this story years ago repeatedly. i thought i was imagining it but you definitely added some stuff right? :) :) like the twilight bit in this chapter. and i'm almost certain it wasn't Benjamin Button that they watched then but King Kong? and i'm not too sure if you removed it or maybe i just missed it but there was a part where Ben handed her some napkins to wipe her hands with since she's eating buttery popcorn. hehehe i must be freaking you. just wanted to let you know, you have a fan in me. and i love love knowing that you this site and update your stories, too! thank you thank you thank you