THIS IS ADORABLE.

I do hope you continue soon! C:

What's with the stuff Kraken was saying?

Wow I like this, it's really funny and different. I realy liked Kraken and Douglas is a brilliant main character!

Cute chapter here! Great work

HAH! Kraken is love. LOVE. and...mersquirrels! *hums with glee*

is it strange that i find it amusing how the merman is called DOUGLAS? ah, so much love. and phillip turning into "fillup". xD

Kraken is made of awesome!

And yay for Fillip and Douglas meeting again! :-)

Aw, I think it's cute. And quite funny, which is always a plus. I haven't noticed any major errors or plotholes yet... smooth sailing ahead! ...Well, I tried. I love puns, but I'm just no good at them.

-SapphireIris

cool story :) a great take on the little mermaid with slash lol can't wait to read what happens with the sea witch

Terrific job! Your writing flows together naturally which makes it very easy to read. Luv the humor, the puns, and Douglas, who is so cute! I'm def looking forward to reading more.

Oh, more please? LOL I loved his first "encounter" with a human!

MOAR. pls? Will there be MOAR soon?

*laugh* OMG though. That is an ignominious start to poor Doug's relations with humans. Hahahaha... WHAT WILL HAPPEN?

And the puns... the puns are SO DELIGHTFUL.Carp in stead of crap, he, "one stream mind" he... I love them.

I want more. I want to know what hapens. How does Doug get on land? How will he be able to breath up there? So many questions! They must be answered!

It is love, my dear. Wonderful story! But so woefully incomplete...

Nice idea. Definitively something I'm interested in reading to the end. I like your style, takes you close even when you're talking about mermaids. And for what I've been reading of your stories I think it'll be worth to keep you on my favorites. :D

Please continue this story.

You have a great idea. I laughed at some points, and uh, Douglas is just cute.
Please keep up the good work.

But... I have a question. Wouldn't it be a better idea to come up with fantasy names for the mermaids? you know, Douglas is a pretty common /human/ name. (:

wow. :)
this looks promising. please continue.

:D

Aw, this is so cute and fun! :-) I love it.