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Please keep working on this it is so amusing. Come on please, please finish it--I love Hades as the grumpy old guy and Persephone as a sorta Mrs. PMS but both really good people that haven't discovered each other in the right way yet. Please, please, please, finish it. I'll go to the health club at least four times a week and adhere faithfully to my diet if you do.

Hopefully the love goddess is borrowing Adonis for a spell so that way her toy is out of harm's way...not a bad update :)

Love this story (: can't wait for more!

I love this story, particularly your characterisation of Hades, and the way you gradually develop the relationship between Persephone and him. Brilliant!

like the chapter!i have a feeling who it might be!update soon!

Sweet ^.^ That's more like it! I love the last line--"I'm back"--very classic

i love this story!update soon!

I think Hades is a little more firm and stronger willed than you make him out to be. I mean, a king can't be a push over or everybody tramples over him. Hades needs a bit more of a commanding presence. Less talk, more action. If he's going to punish somebody, show that it happens. Hades is King and his word is law.

Plus, Kings can't fly off the handle so often because it would ruin his reputation and it wouldn't help the kingdom. Hades seems to strike me as the type who, after judging spirits for centuries, is more apt to become apathetic and withdrawn than the short-tempered, demanding god you've made him out to be.

i loved this chapter and this story! update soon!

I am not sure if we are supposed to feel mad at Hades or celebrate Persephone's affair, but I actually feel really awful for Hades. Maybe it is because I have a soft spot for the myth and like to believe that they had a happier marriage than that of other immortals. Either way I like the story

I love mythology. I think this is wonderful. I don't usually review stories, but this one...I love it very much. Please continue. :D

This is very well written and has awesome potential. In the first chapter, although I myself am familiar with the details, I think it would do the story a lot of good to include more about the relationship between Zeus and Hades, and perhaps about the other "family" members and Gods and Goddesses. I believe that this alone would give the reader a more in depth understanding of everything that is going on, and could possibly give you a more stable foundation for future happenings within your story. Good job overall!

Brilliant writing, i love it! The conversations, especially, are your strong point. Also love the descriptions. I can find your voice in them. Can't wait for an update. i always wished that persephone would fall in love with hades...

please tell me your carrying on with this story, it's good, original opening everyone else goes through the whole, "i've been watching you forever" bit before hand. this sounds more realistic for the story