Yay!! Very cool. I hope he dies. I don't really want her to die. Yeah. Sweet.

That was kinda creepy. I wonder if his sex organ will off while he's taking a leak. I guess that was a pretty bad thought sorry I mentioned that. Anyhow, good chapter and all that jazz.

~SirScott

Sweet! That moron needs to stop making a mess with his telekinesis stuff. Wouldn't the duct tape hurt if you tried to pull it off his skin? Never mind.

Wow, the ex-boyfriend and the zombie boyfriend meet. First, thought that went through my mind was this girl could pick some winners. Too bad his hand fell off and he couldn't kill the dog.

~SirScott

Okay, I take that back. Ryker's a jerk. lol. A BIG jerk. Her nose is bleeding and he complains about a stupid dog barking. She shoulda stayed with Matt. But this is an interesting twist to it. I can't wait to read more! =) Great chapter

-Gabby

Haha! Oh that's great. Ryker seems like an okay guy. A weird one, but okay nonetheless. This is so cool. Did I mention I love this story? You really know how to come up with great plots. I wonder what's gonna go on with Tara.

-Gabby

I was really curious to see how you came up with your title. Poor Tara it's amazing she didn't crap herself. Being trapped in the house could be worse than death.
Good job with this chapter.

~SirScott

Good job. I'm enjoying the almost sadistic humor of this. Definitely an interesting read for me. And I certainly hope you update soon. I must admit, though, I kept getting Linda and Tara mixed up. Maybe I'm just tired. . .

Haha, I like where this is going. Ryker is a dickhead, but other than that, I'm enjoying it all. Nice.

i love this story its so funny!

Sweet!I don't know how she can like him, he's like, always cold. Ew!

I was reading to pass the time, and this was one I came across because of its hook. I have to say that you have something really creative going here. Based on the first chapter alone, I was impressed with the characters, mainly the dead boy brought back to life and the way he went about sending his message. His actions themselves gave life to his character, no pun intended.

There was one thing, though, that I'd like to bring up. You may want to have someone look your chapters over because I spotted several grammatical errors. They were fairly minor in the grand scheme of things, but I think another once-over can help it flow better. Otherwise, I think this has potential to be something big because of its unusual plot. I know ghost stories are prevalent here in FP, but a poltergeist come to life is another entirely.

I wish Matt was a little more dirty and gritty as opposed to coming back to life and having things back to normal (at least from his point-of-view), but I suppose it's more of my preference than anything. Keep up the good work. :)

Pretty good story so far. I thought the killing of the little dog was pretty funny. It would be scary to be with someone that had that power.
Keep up the good work.

~SirScott

This story is so creative and addicting! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Yay! At first I was like, "gosh, telekinesis is so unrealistic" then I was like, "oh, so is bringing someone back from the dead" it's okay. That guy is a creep, I think I like the kitchen boyfriend better.