I really like the story so far and the girl was funny... I don't know her name... oh Tyler XD yea. sorry. Anyway, update soon :)

i think alternating points of view would be cool
i like this chapter...update soon!
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OMG! this is a terrific story so far keep it coming please, you are so talented

I'm too lazy to log in :p

I checked my email and I was like "what story is this?" So I started to read and I was like "OH YEAH! Story I like!" so I'm reviewing.

Wow, I sounded like a dumb person for a second XD

Good chapter! Keep it up!

hahaha...omg the old perverted man with the teeth missing. priceless. and the stewardess? lol! would love to read some more =) thanks for your review by the way =)

UPDATE please!
i like your story!

This is good so far! I really like all the detail that you put into this. I also like how you have developed the characters. They seem so real! I think you need to make something come up so that she still has a threat that her dad still might find her or entice the reader to keep reading.
~Rachel Libster~

poor sunglasses:( that made me laugh.

its really good and i think for the next chapter you should put in the 2 p.o.v's to make it longer.

Just start a new chapter. Seriously, youalready finished this one. But I loved your summary, and so far, this is really good. Update soon!

She’s hilarious! The guy on the airplane…total creeper. “...little lady, does that not scream child molester?” haha. Flight attendants can be awfully chipper sometimes, but it’s better than them being bitchy. The death stare the flight attendant gave her after she (what is the main girls name? have I totally missed that or has it not been mentioned yet?) mimicked her was great. I hate it when my sunglasses break (I have way too many sunglasses and honestly have no need for them but anyway…) and the pair she had sounded awesome. Oh was it her dad watching her! Meeting will probably be awkward but she’ll probably have some quirky/ sarcastic outlook on it. I’ll just have to wait and find out.

Well, this was an entertaining read hahah
I like how quirky the main character sounds.
I'm interested in seeing where this goes.

Update soon, yeah?

Hmm... this was an exciting start. It was humorous and sincere. I liked how anxious and nervous she was. “I appeared to be the only one still conscious” and she’s “been sitting in the same position for several hours”. It was such a nicely written atmosphere. So she’s going to go live with her dad, right? This seems like it will be pretty awesome! I’m interested in seeing where the storyline goes.

I love how this story seems to be working out wonderfully, only with a few paragraphs.

Update soon. :)

This sounds really cool!

OMG...can you add another ch?