It's beautiful and peaceful. At some points the rhyming seems contricted, but the poem overall has a soft, lulling feel to it that I find comforting.

I like how peaceful is this.

beautiful writing.

you seem to be searching and finding but not taking. that's the only way you get what you want. you want someones heart, then take it from them.

Aw, so sweet! It flowed well and the rhyming wasn't overdone. Great Job!

This is very good. My favorite part was-

I think I’ve stumbled onto something
Worth my time
I need to find you,
Need to feel you,
Need to put you to the test
Need to know that you might be
The antidote to my disease

Nice job!