Though the light of her true self is dim
We still know she’s too good for him
Now if she’d realize the same

I think that part is where it shows how hurt she is...
touching piece.

Here's a part where the flow is off.
"Her guy’s a big fat hypocrite
Says he’s saved, but it doesn’t fit
The way he acts and treats his wife"

Otherwise I just hafta wonder if this is a reality for you. If it is... then it'll be happening to a lot of my friends these days. I find that sad.

Really like the "she doesn't even know" repeating, though. Good touch.

'Til next,
CD 1.0

Um, this is interesting. Does this happen to relate to anyone you know? I sure hope it doesn't.

i haven't been able to read all your stuff! but i decided to look this one over quickly.
it kind of summarized some of my fears of the future and what will happen to my group of close friends.
thank you for your writing.