 ShadeOfSolitude 2009-03-29 . chapter 1Well done!
A very interesting read, I like the twist at the end. You did well in conveying the emotions of Taylor. It is written quite well :)
Though just a few things, like the reasons why she goes into the compound despite knowing Alex for a day seems a little vague. Also, the dialogue is a bit stilted sometimes and can interrupt the flow of the story. Other than that its pretty good :) |