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ShadeOfSolitude 2009-03-29 . chapter 1
Well done!
A very interesting read, I like the twist at the end. You did well in conveying the emotions of Taylor. It is written quite well :)

Though just a few things, like the reasons why she goes into the compound despite knowing Alex for a day seems a little vague. Also, the dialogue is a bit stilted sometimes and can interrupt the flow of the story. Other than that its pretty good :)
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