Hey,

This was pretty nice! I liked the wave that it was so brash and from the heart (or at least, it seemed like it). Some lines could have been better placed somewhere else, but it's pretty darn good the way it is! Well done! :D

ranDUMM

AW, I felt happy when I read this. I could actually imagine this because I know what you mean...You know I treasure those memories and feelings. I tried to remember that feeling of the warm and happy light soaking in me whenever I am sad. I could try to remember that feeling of weightlessness on a happy day with my friends and family. I have so many feelings...I barely go out and do so many things like people, so these feelings of soaking in the light is treasured. I barely have those memories and feelings...You know this inspired me to make a poem. It's going to sound a lot like what I wrote to you now. XD. Well, bye, Mandii! 3

that was good! i felt the light! WOW.