This is a great story, but you need to know when to correctly use was vs. were, wasn't vs. weren't

Sorry, this just really bugged me. Third to last line should be "We did fail at that and I'm not in love and I thought you WEREN'T"

Love your story so far, (I'm a slow reader :)) and love you on ADOR.

wow...this story is so interesting!

i really dont believe in love at first sight either, but hey, im 16-almost 17- years old, so i have a lot of living left to do!

but, yeah...can't wait to see what goes on next!

OMG... That's a fantastic story. I'm definitly excited to read the second one in the sequel now!

I love this story so much and actually feel close to tears that it's over. However, I am glad that you've started the Helen/Chandler story. They're everyone's favourite characters :D

I loved this fic. I was hoping to see Chandler and Helen realize their love for each other and actually get together, but that didn't happen. So I'm excited to see you fic specifcially about them. I hope to see Lindsey and Mikey in this second fic as contributing characters.

Can't wait!

WOW this story has blossomed and I'm sad I've missed so much. I can't wait for the sequels!

I loved the last few chapters. Nothing ever runs smoothly but i cant wait till the wedding :D

i love the last few chapters and how nervous Lindsey is about telling people

Update soon!

xx

I think that the first chapter started out a bit too quick. Don't get me wrong, your writing is wonderful, and your other readers love it. So perhaps it's just me. Anyway, try to give a little more time for development before you go off and make the main character start to fall for the other main character. (: Good luck!

Oh wow, these new chapters have been explosive and I can't wait until we find out what happens. And how sneaky are Helen and Chandler for tricking Lindsey into that weekend away! I hope their plan works. Please write more soon!

You know u almost had me crying on that chpater and its cruel that all that happened so close to Lindsey's bday. Glad Helen knws what happened about Kent leaving the gang. UPDAT please

This story shows no sign of stopping and I do notice openings for new stories such as Helen and Jack ;) I do love that coupling. Might eventually ask you permish to do a one shot with them :)

This story is immense! I'm disgusted in how little reviews there are! Please oh please write more!

OMG. That's an explosive chapter. I'm glad Nate is finally dead but I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens to the baby!

Update soon, please!