I love this story so much and actually feel close to tears that it's over. However, I am glad that you've started the Helen/Chandler story. They're everyone's favourite characters :D

I loved this fic. I was hoping to see Chandler and Helen realize their love for each other and actually get together, but that didn't happen. So I'm excited to see you fic specifcially about them. I hope to see Lindsey and Mikey in this second fic as contributing characters.

Can't wait!

WOW this story has blossomed and I'm sad I've missed so much. I can't wait for the sequels!

I loved the last few chapters. Nothing ever runs smoothly but i cant wait till the wedding :D

i love the last few chapters and how nervous Lindsey is about telling people
Update soon!!
xx

I think that the first chapter started out a bit too quick. Don't get me wrong, your writing is wonderful, and your other readers love it. So perhaps it's just me. Anyway, try to give a little more time for development before you go off and make the main character start to fall for the other main character. (: Good luck!

Oh wow, these new chapters have been explosive and I can't wait until we find out what happens. And how sneaky are Helen and Chandler for tricking Lindsey into that weekend away!! I hope their plan works. Please write more soon!!

You know u almost had me crying on that chpater and its cruel that all that happened so close to Lindsey's bday. Glad Helen knws what happened about Kent leaving the gang. UPDAT please

This story shows no sign of stopping and I do notice openings for new stories such as Helen and Jack ;) I do love that coupling. Might eventually ask you permish to do a one shot with them :)

This story is immense! I'm disgusted in how little reviews there are!! Please oh please write more!!

OMG. That's an explosive chapter. I'm glad Nate is finally dead but I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens to the baby!
Update soon, please!!

Its back its back its back :D. I love this chapter-Nates finally dead after Lindsey stands up for herself. Horrible that the baby has more than likely died. Liked the flashback scenes
UPDATE
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I love how realistic you make this farfetched business actually sound. After reading your work, you actally start to believe that there are gangs out there torturing people because they've done wrong against their boss. It's amazing how easy you manipulate (bad word choice, I know, but couldn't think of anything else) people by your writing. I love it. I also think that the Helen and Kent relationship needs to be explored soon. Book two?

The torture scene is great cz u go on real life fears and Nate is horrible-and that you find out more about Denzels death
And i hate Mikey for wat hes sacrificed to get Lindsey back but im sure Helen will hate him, Lindsey too probably lol
Love it-and you already know i want an update soon lol

OHEMGEE! That was fantastic. I was waiting to see if Nathan knew about the baby but I didn't expect it in such an explosive manner. I loved it. You know how to write horror scenes really well. The right balance of drama and seriousness. I have a feeling the baby isn't going to survive but that's just my feelings.
AND AS IF MIKEY COULD DO THAT TO HELEN?! All she has ever done is be a good friend to him and he repays her by just handing over her son to the meanest guy on the planet... Oh I can't wait until either she or Chandler finds out (because we already know that Chandler sees him as his too). And will Helen allow Kent's parents see Hadlee? Oh god, im all excited now. I want the next chapter up!
PLEASE OH PLEASE UPDATE SOON!