hi gal!
i luv how dah story's goin so far
ur really gud
i swear
cnt wait till dah nxt chapter
so u better be fast k
byez
best of luck for dah best storie eva written in fictionpress!
LMAO

more please

I love this story. Can't wait for you update. xoxo Nathania

AWEE!

haha! that guy is awesome (Aiden)
But Kayleigh needs to get her head straight
(more please!)

Hi nissa,
my name is Rozalia (Zali for short)
i love your writing style and the quick punchy lines included.
keep writing and remember that most successful writers started out small.
and from small things big things grow.
xx Zali

""Well it involves you, me, and and a little cabin in Brockenridge, Colorado!""

Actually, that should be "Breckenridge" ;-)

And I'd suggest adding more "action" and less talking...

good luck continuing!

""How far along are you?" He asked.

"I don't know yet, I have an appointment at the doctor's office next week,""

Actually, she does know...since she's only had sex once, she'd be that far along...

Anyway off to read more

What is sorng with you?! Why would you tell me that the horse form Flicka got attacked by a mountain lion?! I knew that was a depressing movie, that's why I refuse to watch it,; I don't need you to tell me what happens in it! [Shaking fist at you] You hould be ashamed of yourself!

great story, can't wait for the next chapter

Thanks for updating! (FINALLY :p)

Was a pretty goodly chaapter!

o.O
love this
keep it up hun!
mwah
xx

LOL, the..third to last line, ("Well it involves you, me, and and a little cabin in Brockenridge, Colorado!"), sounded like a hook-up line ;] i don't even know why i find that funny but it's probably since it's 3ish in the morning and i can't sleep -_-
anyways, i hope your writer's block will be cured and that you'll update soon ;]

loved the chapter
can't wait for the next one

CAN'T WAIT 2 READ WAT HAPPENS NEXT OH AND PLEASE PLEASE MAKE THE NEXT 1 LONGER CAUSE I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY