|Reviews for Breathing Deeply|
| BlackRosesFreedom 8/28/09 . chapter 1
Aww! I see the inside story in this and its good. I like it!
| rolliepollie44 3/30/09 . chapter 1
It was so perfect the way you put breathing deeply;
and then another action right after it.
I loved that. :D
And I loved the repeated fallings as well, this poem had a really nice flow but yet still was choppy and had good pauses. Lovely. :)
| Joker4MartialArtsGurl 3/30/09 . chapter 1